ESSAY-A-DAY #2

2nd June 2018
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Revision & Exam Practice for the “legacy” A Level qualifications including:

  • Edexcel (Unit 3C – Representative Processes in the USA, Unit 4C – Governing the USA)
  • AQA (Unit 3A – The Politics of the USA, Unit 4A – The Government of the USA)
  • OCR (F855 – US Government & Politics)

How to use these questions for revision and exam practice:

  1. For long-answer or essay questions, plan a 4 paragraph response using the PEEACH paragraph structure (P=point, E=evidence, E=explain, A=argument, C=counter argument, H=how does this answer the question?)
  2. Once you have completed your question, read the indicative content.
  3. Using the essay criteria, colour code each criteria to show how successful you were at including this in your essay (red, amber or green)
  4. There is also a space for you to add additional notes and/or examples that don’t appear in the indicative content, or add better explanations, or include additional, points from the indicative content.

To what extent has the Obama administration departed from traditional Democratic values and policies? (45)

 

Introduction

 

 

 

 

 

P

 

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C

 

H

 

  P

 

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A

 

C

 

H

 

 
P

 

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A

 

C

 

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  P

 

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Conclusion

 

 

 

 

 

Indicative Content

Policies of the Obama presidency which could be considered stereotypically Democratic include:

·         intervention in the economy to promote growth, e.g. 2009 stimulus bill

·         federal provision of welfare, e.g. Affordable Care Act

·         rights of women, e.gg. Lily Ledbetter Fair Pay Act, support for abortion rights, e.g. in reversal of ‘Mexico City’ policy

·         rights of gays and lesbians, e.g. repeal of ‘don’t ask, don’t tell’, support for same sex marriage

·         minority rights, e.g. Fair Sentencing Act reducing disparity between sentences for crack and powder cocaine, amicus brief supporting affirmative action in Fisher v Texas, support for Dream Act and then comprehensive immigration reform

·         support for gun control, e.g. programme announced January 2013 and support for Manchin-Toomey amendment

·         environmental protection, e.g. support for ‘cap and trade’ legislation and when this failed to be passed by Congress, regulations issued by the EPA to regulate CO2 emissions in 2014

 

Policies of the Obama presidency which could be considered unstereotypically Democratic include:

·         Afghanistan ‘surge’ in 2010

·         air strikes on Libya in 2011

·         retention of military commissions and indefinite detention

·         increased use of drones, including killing of Anwar Al-Awlaki, the first time since the 9/11 attacks that an American citizen was deliberately targeted and killed by American forces

·         mass NSA surveillance programme revealed by Edward Snowden

·         lukewarm relationship with organised labour, e.g. failure to push for Employee Free Choice Act, which died in Congress; tentative and belated support for Democratic candidate running against Scott Walker in Wisconsin recall election 2012; passage of free-trade agreements, e.g. with Panama, South Korea and Colombia; pay freeze on federal workers

·         ambivalence over Keystone pipeline, decision still not made

 

 

Essay Part Criteria RAG
Introduction Clear and detailed knowledge of the premise of the question  
Clear outline of overall argument of the extent of agreement with the statement in the question  
Agreement with the statement  PEAACH paragraph 1  
 PEAACH paragraph 2  
 (PEAACH paragraph 3)  
Disagreement with the statement  PEAACH paragraph 1  
 PEAACH paragraph 2  
 (PEAACH paragraph 3)  
Conclusion Clear and detailed re-statement of extent of support (sustained argument)  
Relative analysis of extent of support for each argument (evaluation of argument)  
RED AMBER GREEN
Argument stated, little to no explanation, lacking example and analysis of this Argument is explained clearly and supported with a relevant example, may  lack analysis of this and development of explanation Argument is fully explained and developed and supported with a precise and detailed example, clear analysis of this in relation to the question

 

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